Great job!
You've got some amazing tracks here! Your ideas and melodies are creative and catchy, which shows your compositional talent.
You could definately use some more recognization, so I'm going to 5 all of your tracks.
Keep up the great work!
5/5
Wow! :O Thank you! ^_^
I'm glad you like my music. :) If you have any music, I'll make sure to review and vote, too! :O
Thanks for the review! ^_^
Good job!
I loved it. It felt so alive, it was hard to explain. There were so many things going on at once, and yet it never sounded cluttered. That's quite difficult to do, but you do it masterfully.
You've improved quite a bit since you started here, which is certainly the direction you want to be going.
What sequencer and samples are you using? Keep up the good work!
5/5
Thanks man!
-I use Fruity Loops 6, Triangle II, multiple sound FX samples from teh interweb, and a sample or two donated by g-rave. Maybe another plugin, but I'm not sure.
-Thanks for the awesome comments! I'll keep ya posted on future songs!
-SuperDrummer146
Great Imagination
You've got a mind for composition, I can see that quite clearly in this piece. I loved everything about this, it never got boring. What you need now is some better sounds.
What are you using currently? Are you using a keyboard, or are you using a sequencer for your sounds?
Your music would really shine with some high quality samples. Keep up the great work!
5/5
Thanks. I'm currently working with Chronamut to get better sounds. I will definately want them for my soundtrack pieces so i'm working as hard as I possibly can.
Thanks for the review.
Nice work!
Captured the image of little mice running around playing tricks on eachother and fighting and such. Kudos there!
The pizzicato in the bass was a nice touch, but I think it could have changed to fit the melody better (there were some chordal changes in the melody that the bass could have followed).
I loved the mallet parts and the big hits, they were supurbly done. I personally feel they were the highlight of this piece.
Always good to see that a composer can do multiple styles!
5/5
Serene Indeed!
You set the mood very well, nothing sounded out of place.
I enjoyed the flute at the beginning, it was at a good volume, although it ended too abruptly, it sounded like the flute had missed a few notes (increase the release of the flute to trail off). The cello could have been slightly louder, and on the quicker notes the attack should have been quicker, it sounded electronic with each new note.
Consider bringing in a few strings towards the middle of the piece to give it a little more body. It would help the piece feel like it's building and going somewhere. I could see strings entering and playing along with the flute the 2nd time in a high octave.
My orchestral remix of Defcon Zero kind of shows what I am talking about (no self-ad intended).
Great work, you have a diverse range of emotions displayed in all of your music. That is the sign of a more experienced artist!
5/5
Great job
Hey bud!
Thought I would check out your audio page again, it's been a while.
The most impressive thing about this is that it sounds like you were trying to imitate MilkManDan's style. I heard you in there, but I heard him too. It was actually a little creepy.
You've got great compositional talent, but (as I always encouraged) I would recommend you go out and get a little theory training if you haven't already. It would add a lot to your works. You have some clashing notes and melodies in here which could be avoided in the future if you were to learn about counterpoint and harmonies and all that fun stuff!
Nonetheless, this review is to one of the great artists of Newgrounds, and you certainly lived up to your reputation with this piece.
See you around!
Thank you David, you're words are truly moving to me, as I have a great respect to your music as well.
Indeed I do not know music theory, and I will learn the basics, but that is as far as I am willing to go. I have seen many of my friends who wanted to learn music, take courses, and though they got good, in the end, they all feel into the "cluster", which is my way of saying, they began to make things that everybody else made, nothing new or original. This is my biggest fear, and something I will avoid at all costs. Even if my music does not sound professional, it will sound like me, and not like the teacher in front of the class.
Thanks for your review again, keep up the good fight!
Not bad
My main complaint about this would be that you need to equalize your parts out better. I could barely hear the piano at the beginning.
I would try to add in some new parts. Little things like synth pads in the background, or little rhythmic motifs that occur in places help to help keep your stuff fresh.
This sounds like a great start, but it doesn't have that finished feel to it. Nonetheless, good work, and keep at it!
haha i would love to do all that, but as you know... i used garageband for this! i can put in 5 tracks possible at max, or my comp will freeze =( fl is at y dads and i have a song made but not exported =P so i was broed and made this!! haha thx for the review! ill look toadd some more pads and little things. im tryign really hard to work on that.
Improvement
You're no pro (yet), but you've improved a lot, and that's very commendable. At this rate you may be able to get into SIX1, if you're still aiming for that.
The piece was repetitious, unfortunately. I would suggest adding a melody into it. It's amazing what a simple melody can do to improve a piece.
Keep at it!
5/5
I'm going to give you some 5's down your audio page, hopefully you can get more recognition and reviews to help you improve.
thank you so much! wow your awesome man! thx! o and everyone might as well forget about six1 =P even if i do go pro, my stuff wont be there. the site is dead, and alot of brats are there =P. yes yes yes melody is what i need. i could not think of one tho =( so i just have a bassline. most of th songs i do in l right now will be basslines. ill look into melodys a lil later im still experimentsing wiht it ^_^ this is m best song ive ever did ^_^ haha yay thx for the 5's btw!
Not bad
You guys can play your instruments with some skill, which is (sadly) better than a lot of bands on Newgrounds.
I would strongly suggest you guys pool together 50 pounds and buy a better mic. You would sound much better if you did that.
I'm going to go ahaid and 5 all your stuff in hopes you get more feedback by people. Keep at it!
hey thnx 4 the review and score!! We all don't currently have much income but were getting summer jobs now and we should be able to aford a better mic soon so expect some more music from us soon with vocals! thnx agen
Nicely done!
At the beginning I was growing a bit tired of the bells, I would shorten that a bit, or introduce something in a little sooner. It wasn't a big issue though, I didn't find it to get anoying, which is always a good thing.
I have a big soft spot for choirs, and when I heard them in hear the piece grew on me in an instant. The guitar was also masterfully played, the bends were great, and the whole part fit perfectly.
I'm a fan of bands like Sonata Arctica, Masterplan and Symphony X, so it's no surprise that I enjoyed this too!
Keep up the great work!
Yeh, i spose i did let the xylaphone section go on for a bit. Yeh i love choirs when mixed with big crunchy guitars. Everyone keeps talking about sonata arctica, i should check them out. Thanks for the review!!
Audio for games, films, and television. Credits include Castle Crashers, Call of Duty: Heroes, Call of Duty: Siege, as well as many iconic flash series right here on Newgrounds!
Age 35, Male
Audio Designer
Seattle, WA
Joined on 10/22/05
Dreams of Home--A Lullaby 
