Some nice ideas
There are some nice ideas in here, but the piece sounds unfinished right now. I'd consider adding in some new ideas because the ones you present get stale pretty quickly. A melody would really help tie the piece together.
Also, the voices are a little distracting, consider whether or not they're necessary for the piece. You're off to a good start, with a little polish you could have this into a very nice dance piece!
Ill 5 it because the more exposure you get the better feedback you'll receive!
5/5
If you have a minute I'd love to hear your thoughts about my latest piece ST Suspense!